Ya, the arm coming out of her eye is VERY awkward. I love the softness and her right arm, but the left arm is strange. I like the fact that she's reaching for the light, though. Without the arms, it would've been worse. Best shot of the 4 IMO.
I see the Melrose thing, too. But oddly enough, I like both Adrianne's and (gasp) Robyn's better. It looks like she's thinking only about the pose, and not about anything else. Adrianne's and Robyn's photos coveyed some sort of real emotion to me.